A Developmental Edit Of Your Novel

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Want some concrete advice to help you write the best possible novel?

A developmental edit isn't about catching grammar and spelling mistakes. This is about developing your story. I am here to help you turn your okay or even decent story into one that grips your readers.

Are you struggling with point of view? Engaging in head hopping? These are just some of the problems that writers run into when they tackle the challenge of writing a novel.

What I look for?

• The Theme of the Story.
• The Elements of the Story. How are the hook, premise, character arc, structure, twist, pacing, etc. contributing to the telling?
• Other Craft Issues. If you are writing genre fiction there are certain tropes and conventions that readers expect. If you don't meet those expectations then you are going to have some very unhappy reviews on your work.

Expect a ton of support for the things you've done right and some practical advice to make your storytelling stronger. I understand how incredibly daunting it is to write a novel and how intimidated we get at the thought of putting it out there to be judged by the world.

If you need any help please don't hesitate to get in touch.

Reviews

Seller's Response:

I have always been told that a developmental editor was worth their weight in gold, and Fay is one of those editors. If you are on the fence about booking her services, I highly suggest you take the leap. I will be using her over and over again.

Seller's Response:

Great to work with you, and the manuscript is excellent.

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I got Fay to review my first book last year and she did a fantastic job reviewing it. She was honest and pointed out all the things I had to improve. A year later I once again sought her service for my new book and once she delivered. Her communication is excellent, she is very thorough in her review and feedback. I'm very happy with the service she provided and will definitely use her again for my next book.

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It’s always wonderful when clients come back.

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Faywriter directly cut to the chase. She pointed out some obvious flaws in storyline/telling that I was trying to force, but where in fact, diversionary. Specifically, I was using parallel story telling, with one world real and another not, which was effectively robbing Peter to pay Paul and sacrificing a good story in the process. She also gave constructive criticism and praise / encouragement when it was appropriate.