About:
I have had years of experience reading and editing college admission and supplemental essays. First as an admission counselor, then as assistant director of undergraduate admissions, and now as a college counselor at a top-performing high school.
As your proofreader, I will correct your grammar, spelling, and punctuation as well as provide suggestions for you to improve your essay.
The most common issues I find while reading over college essays are:
- You didn't talk about yourself. Your college essay isn't about your parents, siblings, friends, Einstein, or Lebron James; it's about you!
- You didn't answer the prompt. They asked why you want to go to X university but you told them about how much you love your dog.
- You gave them a million reasons not to accept but and not a single reason to say yes.
Your college application is a story. This crucial piece of the story is one of the few you get to tell in your own words. This is your chance to sell yourself to the admission counselor. So let's give them the best pitch possible!
Disclaimer: I do not write, re-write, or re-phrase college essays for you.
Reviews
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Awesome help, got more for the money than I thought!
:I HIGHLY recommend this seller! With AMAZING feedback & suggestions, he helped me transform my essay.
:The turnaround was very quick and he provided strong feedback on the grammar, syntax, and flow. He also sent a video to help me walk through the edits, which was super useful. I would definitely recommend.
:Mark helped me to realize how the story is from a reader who didn’t know me. It helped to see what parts were confusing and he was very fast when doing so.
:Finished ahead of schedule both times working with him. His insights are very helpful and I think that it has really improved my application essays.
